tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post1317163237003048617..comments2023-07-01T07:31:28.450-06:00Comments on LDS Publisher: 23: More Blessed Are TheyLDS_Publisherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15053645600240124892noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-84107753952731291312010-02-27T22:55:38.191-07:002010-02-27T22:55:38.191-07:00I just love this one. I love the strong, tight poi...I just love this one. I love the strong, tight point of view. You have a great way of expressing Marih's struggle without seeming cheesy or trite, which could happen easily with such a tender subject.<br /><br />Um, I can't think of anything I would change about it. Maybe the section at the beginning with the womens' meetings could be tightened. I'm sure if I combed through it something else might come up, but overall, IMO it's excellent.Emily M.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-22547901586231972992010-02-27T13:56:46.264-07:002010-02-27T13:56:46.264-07:00Very interesting point of view and a valuable less...Very interesting point of view and a valuable lesson. I thought at first the main character seemed ungrateful and whiny, but she grew out of it and by the end, I liked her and the emotion of the story. Original.Kristahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03734014895825429358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-3660125964351181332010-02-22T14:26:36.570-07:002010-02-22T14:26:36.570-07:00I love how this shows how people were changed and ...I love how this shows how people were changed and how Christ's teachings had permeated all of life. That was very well done.Michaela Stephenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04163084369311708249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-28742511744051846962010-02-22T12:02:09.067-07:002010-02-22T12:02:09.067-07:00This is beautifully done. Real emotion and powerfu...This is beautifully done. Real emotion and powerful imagery. Without directly stating when it is, we are able to draw correct conclusion based on dialogue and thought.Tamara Hart Heinerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07562765111202443160noreply@blogger.com