tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post5751987056126863549..comments2023-07-01T07:31:28.450-06:00Comments on LDS Publisher: 9: Calico and LaceLDS_Publisherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15053645600240124892noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-51138583999470831832009-08-20T23:11:12.721-06:002009-08-20T23:11:12.721-06:00I vote for this one.I vote for this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-64151609585717014692009-08-18T19:14:09.860-06:002009-08-18T19:14:09.860-06:00votevoteAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01416747294617936271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-21861935044227996852009-08-18T14:43:33.204-06:002009-08-18T14:43:33.204-06:00My second vote goes for this one.My second vote goes for this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-33926399472434076482009-08-18T13:38:04.584-06:002009-08-18T13:38:04.584-06:00Casting my vote for this. (Just beautiful.) First ...Casting my vote for this. (Just beautiful.) First vote in this category.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-7663550281601420532009-08-18T11:50:53.761-06:002009-08-18T11:50:53.761-06:00This one has my vote.
Absolutely beautiful.This one has my vote.<br /><br />Absolutely beautiful.Annette Lyonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12493583432919249814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-11343299638022916712009-08-17T16:45:58.874-06:002009-08-17T16:45:58.874-06:00I thought you used the phrase "Grab, pull&quo...I thought you used the phrase "Grab, pull" very effectively. It brought me right into the scene, sympathizing with the elderly man.Kaye P. Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300628601690238082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-67975111948173547752009-08-17T14:06:05.375-06:002009-08-17T14:06:05.375-06:00Vote.Vote.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-89088162632837421072009-08-17T13:51:09.186-06:002009-08-17T13:51:09.186-06:00I didn't think it was disjointed at the beginn...I didn't think it was disjointed at the beginning at all. I thought it lent to the mystery and the confusion of the main character. I loved this story, I'm voting for it!Nikkihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16328973674012805812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-69449788962167855072009-08-17T09:52:10.873-06:002009-08-17T09:52:10.873-06:00A bit disjointed in the beginning. Loved the end....A bit disjointed in the beginning. Loved the end.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10565310646552824797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-49558841892579281842009-08-17T09:38:05.229-06:002009-08-17T09:38:05.229-06:00I found it a bit confusing - especially at the beg...I found it a bit confusing - especially at the beginning - at first I thought Lily was dead, but then I realized she had dementia, but then I was trying to decide if she was dead after all.<br /><br />I do love the ending.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-65266907889226195712009-08-15T19:00:50.759-06:002009-08-15T19:00:50.759-06:00I'd start with "Disinfectants..." an...I'd start with "Disinfectants..." and be a little more clear about Lily being gone sooner and the calls from the other room. I was too muddled at the beginning but LOVED your end!Christine Thackerayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551874470033926037noreply@blogger.com