tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post7292198120614150828..comments2023-07-01T07:31:28.450-06:00Comments on LDS Publisher: 7: Christmas ImposterLDS_Publisherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15053645600240124892noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-46392449787526926372009-08-21T10:55:51.311-06:002009-08-21T10:55:51.311-06:00I vote for this one because it's quirky. :-)I vote for this one because it's quirky. :-)Kaye P. Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300628601690238082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-59559386059175942252009-08-17T20:03:01.896-06:002009-08-17T20:03:01.896-06:00This story took quite an unpredictable turn. Good ...This story took quite an unpredictable turn. Good job! I'm glad it had a happy ending.Kaye P. Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300628601690238082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-20744654766433469752009-08-17T10:07:36.856-06:002009-08-17T10:07:36.856-06:00It's kind of creepy.It's kind of creepy.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-34171098398074497872009-08-17T09:50:25.326-06:002009-08-17T09:50:25.326-06:00I enjoyed the voice and feel of the story. I would...I enjoyed the voice and feel of the story. I would have liked a bit more at the beginning that showed Jake being a more of a jerk toward his mom - it would allow for a greater character arc and more impact at the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-13090281775961829582009-08-17T08:02:32.524-06:002009-08-17T08:02:32.524-06:00I vote for this one.I vote for this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-5105465778773117752009-08-15T18:39:57.902-06:002009-08-15T18:39:57.902-06:00I struggled with the setting and age of Jake. At f...I struggled with the setting and age of Jake. At first I thought he was a kid placticing the piano in his living room. Good concept and good voice but I felt it need more clarity, less redundancy- a good edit.Christine Thackerayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551874470033926037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-2707268632882999972009-08-11T16:39:00.363-06:002009-08-11T16:39:00.363-06:00Very cool! I love it!
I like this story both bec...Very cool! I love it!<br /><br />I like this story both because it is a fascinating story, and because it has a very traditional feel about it. It used to be that Christmas was a time of Ghost stories, much like the Christmas Carol type stories.<br /><br />I like how this one has the creepiness about it, but carries such an awesome message of love and closeness.<br /><br />Good job!<br /><br />- ChasChas Hathawayhttp://music.willowrise.comnoreply@blogger.com