tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post7653315178271808849..comments2023-07-01T07:31:28.450-06:00Comments on LDS Publisher: Wet Your Pants Scary* (aka #16)LDS_Publisherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15053645600240124892noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-3473962655577561062007-11-01T10:39:00.000-06:002007-11-01T10:39:00.000-06:00I actually only submitted this one for the humor f...I actually only submitted this one for the humor factor. I started thinking about how I could use "hell" and "dam(n)" in a story, and then about water imagery, and from then, the goal was to have a story filled with so many water-words, you'd practically wet your pants!<BR/><BR/>I see I failed in that particular goal.Jon Spellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13283068961865370674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-59547999386557205512007-11-01T08:08:00.000-06:002007-11-01T08:08:00.000-06:00I 100% agree with our anonymous commenter. It is a...I 100% agree with our anonymous commenter. It is a little cheesy, but I like it. You've got some great imagery. And yes, watch out for contradictory description.<BR/><BR/>It's not horror, but would make a good sci-fi, end of the world story. <BR/><BR/>Yes, I'd keep reading.LDS_Publisherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15053645600240124892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-38308971860187329362007-10-31T00:25:00.000-06:002007-10-31T00:25:00.000-06:00Maybe I'm just a sucker for a bit of cheesiness, b...Maybe I'm just a sucker for a bit of cheesiness, but I vote for #16. <BR/><BR/>In spite of the hardy-har-har aspect of it, it has a starkness that would lend itself well to a sort of dark sci-fi/fantasy story. Maybe it's a standalone, but I'd like to read what happens next if there is more.<BR/><BR/>My only suggestion (so sorry; totally unasked for, I know) is to avoid the possibly contradictory description about how the waves dispersed in all directions, yet all the water is headed towards one place.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com