tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post8536850087730379251..comments2023-07-01T07:31:28.450-06:00Comments on LDS Publisher: 07 The Grumpy SantaLDS_Publisherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15053645600240124892noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-35011377709140435792011-09-28T13:40:25.478-06:002011-09-28T13:40:25.478-06:00I vote for this one.I vote for this one.Janice Sperryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00178805752960449557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-71877574266314993602011-09-28T10:22:55.959-06:002011-09-28T10:22:55.959-06:00I vote for this one.I vote for this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-65772375085635362762011-09-27T10:01:49.817-06:002011-09-27T10:01:49.817-06:00This sounds familiar--so many good things to do th...This sounds familiar--so many good things to do that they aren't fun anymore. What a sweet ending!~T~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-55102120552530501192011-09-26T08:44:31.735-06:002011-09-26T08:44:31.735-06:00Vote! Love this one.Vote! Love this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-1772594887203860292011-09-22T13:02:07.330-06:002011-09-22T13:02:07.330-06:00Wbat a sweet little story. I like how all of the &...Wbat a sweet little story. I like how all of the "busyness" builts up without Shaunna thinking too much about it--just like in real life. For example, she's sewing, and then there's the gingerbread house, and then there's the school play, and the cookies for the ward party, and all the rest of the Christmas shopping... Nothing by itself seems like too big of a deal or too much to handle, but all piled up on top of each other it's a lot to handle! The theme and message of the story probably resonates with most people, especially women, and is a great reminder.<br /><br />I think the last sentence of the first paragraph is missing an "of." There are a couple other typos to watch out for throughout the story. Occasionally the dialogue is a little unrealistic (like when Dan says, "I only want you to do things that really bring peace to your heart," etc.), but it's not that big of a deal.<br /><br />Nice work!Thoughtful Readernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25573541.post-6302346754480426732011-09-22T12:37:07.482-06:002011-09-22T12:37:07.482-06:00I love this story! It reminds me of me and my mom ...I love this story! It reminds me of me and my mom and my sister...all the women I know who are just like Shauna. What a great story to remind us of what we really need to focus on at Christmas.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com