I have a question. LDS Publisher, I would like to see you post a blog about what, in your opinion, LDS authors can do to increase their quality of writing. I'm whacking my head against the wall to drag the very best of myself onto the page, and yet I still seem to be falling short. What does a publisher look for that they're not finding?
1. What can LDS authors do to increase their quality of writing? This is a hard question to answer because everyone is at a different skill level and what I'd suggest to a beginning writer is different than what I'd suggest to a more experienced writer, but I'll try to cover some very general areas.
First, increase your basic writing skills. This means grammar, spelling, and the other technical parts of writing. Many people believe their skills in this area are higher than they really are. They get feedback from family and friends who have similar skill levels and so they do not catch the mistakes. I've had writers go into shock when I point out the grammatical errors in their manuscript. (I've had published authors go into shock when I point out the errors in their published books.) Take some brush-up classes, review some basic grammar texts or find someone with editing experience who is willing to go through your stuff and help you learn. If you use Word, it will underline your grammar errors in green. Word is not always correct, but if you don't know why that green line is there, you need to find out why.
To increase the quality of crafting your story, there is nothing like practice. Write every day. There are so many books out there with writing prompts and other exercises to help you improve. Read some of them and do the exercises. Get in a good writers group, either face-to-face or online, where you can get feedback on your work. Then listen to that feedback.
Read a lot of books, particularly ones that are selling well or those by your favorite authors, but don't just read for fun. As you read, ask yourself why this book works. What are they doing? What is the structure behind the writing? What techniques do they do well? Where did the story slow down for you and why? How could they have done it differently? If you don't know why a particular books works or doesn't work, take a class or read some books on analyzing literature. Study plot building, characterization, dialogue, scene development, descriptive language, foreshadowing, etc.
Learn about genres. Try writing in several of them and decide what you like best. Then learn the rules for that genre. What elements must be included in a good mystery? What in a good romance? They're different.
Learn the basics of manuscript formatting and the usual guidelines for submitting. Again, there are lots of books and magazines on this topic. Read, read, read. Take notes. Learn.
2. What does a publisher look for that they're not finding? Another hard question. It's much easier to tell you what I'm getting that I don't want. I want stories that speak to deep, universal themes--things we can all relate to--but told with a bit of a twist, so it's not just another book about whatever.
As an LDS publisher, I want stories, characters and topics that speak to our unique culture. I want historical fiction, modern fiction, women's stories, mystery, romance. I personally want to see YA and stories for boys, ages 12-18, but the PTBs here at my company aren't very enthusiastic about them because they don't sell as well as adult fiction.
Okay, I just noticed how very long-winded I'm being today, but I don't have time to go back and be more succinct. Have to get back to work. Sorry.