Pitch Contest Responses

Starting today, I will post a pitch and my responses. I only have 5, so we'll do this for the next 5 work days (taking the weekend off). As you read my comments, understand that they are about the quality of the pitch, not about the idea or the book itself. A negative response to your pitch does not mean that your idea or your book wouldn't be wonderful--just that you need to pitch it differently to get it noticed.