I'm pleased to say that most of you (although not all) followed the submission instructions carefully. That is a big deal. Good for you! And even better, good for me! :)
I will be adding my critiques and comments to each story. It will be in red.
If it's a common mistake throughout the story, I will usually only mark it once, and assume that you can go through and find similar places to correct.
At the end of each story, I will post an overall critique, what I liked best, and whether or not I feel it's ready for publication.
I will also e-mail you my story notes and the score sheet I used for evaluating your story. These will usually contain a little more info than what I've posted on the website.